Shanks

If I cover the eyes, it looks pretty dope. If I don't cover the eyes, it kinda looks weird. It's not really the shape of the eyes, more like position of the iris and the black thingy within the iris that I can't remember the name in English for the life of me and I really tried. The fact that area around the eyes and eyes themselves are whiter than the rest of the sketch kinda makes the focal fall on the part that seems most out of place. Perhaps both were intentional (I'm guessing the focal really was), but I'm not sure how well they work together since it is so distracting. The eye just keeps on focusing on that and it feels weird because I can't get a feel on whether or not they are bulged out in a comedic fashion or if he is just looking up or if it is both.

I really like the shape of the eyes and eyebrows though.